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【种族典范】Bloodfury Savage鲜血狂暴者
« 于: 2009-07-09, 周四 15:24:09 »
2009.10.30修改

Bloodfury Savage鲜血狂暴者
“I’ll tear out your heart and make it my feast!”
“我要挖出你的心肝儿下酒吃!”
Prerequisite: Half-orc
前提条件:半兽人
In the veins of your people flows the mingled blood of orcs and humans, a perfect union of ferocity and adaptability. In general, half-orcs manifest the best traits of humans and orcs. In your heart, though, orc drums beat a call to war, stirring a savage craving for violence. You brim with fury you can barely contain, and in the thick of combat it overflows into a raging torrent. Only battle can feed the hunger in your soul, for you were born to the bloodfury.
因为身体里同时流淌着人类和兽人的血液,所以造就了你无以伦比的残暴和适应能力。尽管拥有类似人类的外貌,但你的内心深处还是渴望战鼓的声音和野蛮的暴力。结果这使你的怒气几乎无法控制,你的脾气必须通过战斗来舒缓。最后,当只有无尽的杀戮才能满足你饥渴的灵魂时,一个鲜血狂暴者就诞生了。
For your entire life, you have felt the stirrings of war within you, the conflict between the human and orc halves that define your divided nature. From the battle raging inside, you derive great power, great strength, and above all, a great capacity for destruction. In combat, you lose yourself to the storm, unleashing your bloodfury in a frothing display of violence that inspires fear in all who fight you.
作为一名鲜血狂暴者,你的一生必将与战争相伴。只有那残存的一点人性才能将你和野兽分开。在战斗中,你不仅学会了驾驭强大的力量,而且懂得如何造成更大的破坏。这些能力使你化身为无情的风暴,可以将一连串的攻击砸向任何敢于挑战的你家伙,并且将恐惧留给他们的余生。

Bloodfury Savage Path Features
鲜血狂暴者特性
Eager Action (11th level): When you spend an action point to take an extra action, you also gain a bonus to speed equal to your Dexterity modifier until the end of your next turn.
热血沸腾(11级):当你花费一个行动点进行额外行动时,你得到速度奖励。这个奖励等于你的敏捷调整值,直到你下回合结束。
Fearsome Disposition (11th level): When you make an Intimidate check, you can roll twice and use either result.
可怕的本性(11级):当你进行威胁鉴定时,你可以投掷两次,并使用任何一个结果。
Savage Resilience (16th level): When you use your Half-Orc Resilience racial trait, you also
gain resist 10 to all damage until the end of your next turn.
生于蛮荒(16级):当你使用半兽人回复种族特性的时候,你得到10点抗性,对于任何伤害。直到你下一回合结束。

Bloodfury Savage Powers
鲜血狂暴者威能
Unbound Assault Bloodfury Savage Attack 11
鲜血淋漓 鲜血狂暴者 攻击11
You tear across the battlefield, eager to feed fresh kills to your weapon.
你杀入战场,将手中的武器沾满鲜血。
Encounter ✦ Weapon
遭遇 武器
Standard Action Melee weapon
标准动作 近战 武器
Effect: Before the attack, you shift 3 squares.
效果:在攻击之前,你可以移动3格。
Target: One creature
目标:一个敌人
Attack: Strength or Dexterity vs. AC
攻击:力量或者敏捷vs.AC
Hit: 3[W] + Strength or Dexterity modifier damage, and you gain a +4 bonus to damage rolls against the target until the end of your next turn.
命中:3[W] +力量或者敏捷调整值的伤害;而且你对于目标有+4的伤害骰抵抗,直到你下一回合结束。
Special: When you gain this power, choose Strength or Dexterity as the ability you use when making attack rolls and damage rolls with this power.
特殊:当你得到这个威能时,选择力量或者敏捷之一作为威能的攻击骰。

Frothing Madness Bloodfury Savage Utility 12
血雨腥风 鲜血狂暴者 辅助12
Something erupts inside you, turning you into a relentless force of destruction.
一股无名的怒火从你体内喷发出来,被转化为恐怖的破坏力。
Daily ✦ Stance
每日 姿势
Minor Action Personal
次要动作 个人
Effect: Until the stance ends, you gain a +2 bonus to damage rolls and a +5 bonus to saving throws.
效果:直到姿势结束,你得到+2伤害奖励和+5豁免奖励。

Murderous Rage Bloodfury Savage Attack 20
杀戮盛宴 鲜血狂暴者 攻击20
You swear that your foe will not survive this battle, as you focus your steadily growing fury on it.
你用你的诅咒和怒火侵蚀着敌人,并保证他们活不过今天。
Daily ✦ Weapon
每日 武器
Standard Action Melee weapon
标准规动作 近战 武器
Target: One creature
目标:一个敌人
Attack: Strength or Dexterity vs. AC
攻击:力量或者敏捷vs.AC
Hit: 4[W] + Strength or Dexterity modifier damage.
命中:4[W] +力量或者敏捷调整值的伤害。
Miss: Half damage.
失手:一半伤害。
Effect: Until the end of the encounter, you gain a +1 bonus to damage rolls against the target. Whenever you hit the target with a melee attack, this bonus increases by 1.
效果:直到遭遇结束,你对于目标的攻击得到+1奖励伤害骰。无论何时你再用近战攻击命中目标,这个奖励就再增加1.
Special: When you gain this power, choose Strength or Dexterity as the ability you use when making attack rolls and damage rolls with this power.
特殊:当你得到这个威能时,选择力量或者敏捷之一作为威能的攻击骰。
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【种族典范】Bloodfury Savage鲜血狂暴者
« 回帖 #1 于: 2009-07-09, 周四 21:05:42 »
嗯....跟翻译无关的建议....

附上原文是好习惯,不过把翻译跟原文分开放如何?在下是觉得这样比较好看,也不会弄得看的人眼花撩乱的 :em007  
愚蠢都是相互成就的。不要去成就别人的愚蠢。

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【种族典范】Bloodfury Savage鲜血狂暴者
« 回帖 #2 于: 2009-07-09, 周四 21:33:45 »
to damage rolls against the target
对目标的伤害骰,不是伤害抵抗..

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【种族典范】Bloodfury Savage鲜血狂暴者
« 回帖 #3 于: 2009-07-09, 周四 23:17:31 »
其实我早发现中英文放在一起很难看清楚 :em004
但是就剩两个典范了,翻译完一起修改吧……

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【种族典范】Bloodfury Savage鲜血狂暴者
« 回帖 #4 于: 2009-07-09, 周四 23:50:39 »
Hit: 4[W] + Strength or Dexterity modifier damage.
命中:3[W] +力量或者敏捷调整值的伤害。

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岩石不因体积而比钻石更珍贵,那宇宙又怎会因体积而比人类更伟大呢?

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【种族典范】Bloodfury Savage鲜血狂暴者
« 回帖 #5 于: 2009-10-27, 周二 14:31:23 »
gain a +n bonus to damage rolls against the target

不是“你得到+n奖励伤害抵抗骰”
而是“你对目标的伤害骰得到+n的奖励”

这个地方,差距太大了~~~~